Walk in…walk out

The two of us:
We walk into a haunted house,
and we paint our faded love on its aging wall.
We use a dark red paint
and we splash it, anger pouring out.
We mainly highlight the bad and the ugly, as usual.
We leave out all the good memories
since we now see them as nothing but worthless antiques,
buried deep inside our melancholic heart.
And when we finally walk out
of that haunted house,
in oppposite directions,
we set it on fire,
permanently destroying whatever is left of us.

***

I wonder if he has released any album; I really like the way he played this piece:

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18 thoughts on “Walk in…walk out

  1. Gee, lots of anger. I see red all through this piece. Violent, strong emotions.

    “…and we splash it, anger pouring out.
    We mainly highlight the bad and the ugly, as usual.”

    Very strong, powerful poem. Feelings are transferred to the reader….
    It all adds up to a good piece!

  2. This really really cool. I love it that it’s a dream, yet comes across so realistically. The fact thay tou call up such deep emotions like passiion and anger, yet leave the cause unspoken makes it quite effective in its narrative, leaving me with a sense of mystery. The nding is fabulous.

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